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Contributed by
supercreep
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Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 01:56:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Lost in blank dark hot space
where I pace
the ceiling
door
and wall
spin on my swivel chair
chew my nails
and constantly check my empty email.
Is there anybody out there
Reading these lines?!
or have I simply past my best before day
no longer up with the times.
I have become adicted to poetry dot com
and getting comments
so please won't someone send me a comment
before too long!
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supercreep
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2008-06-22 01:56:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: No Comments
(User Rating: 1 ) by wheels on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 02:43:18 AM AEST (User
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I love you - you are funny and cute! Your poems are wonderful. Don’t Stop! I’ll cry with you - but don’t stop.
I love your meter, and flow, and humor and I like the crazy impatience we feel that you describe so perfectly here. I see much more than just the frustration of the moment. We tell ourselves that acceptance is not important and we don’t care, but to know you matter and what you do can be appreciated is an addiction we all have. We resolve ourselves to solitude but prescribe our doses of acceptance to feed our souls – keep us moving – keep us alive.
Don’t stop!
kevin
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