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a wish of lover
Contributed by
lovely_poet
on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 11:50:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Deep down in the valleys
along with flowers and birds
use to live a couple.
their love was as inspiring
as inspiring was nature,s beauty
if paradise was somewhere
it was in their heart
and in nature around them
so happy were they
UNTIL when dark clods covered the sky
they were reflection of some thoughts
going in his mind
there was sense of fear in the environment
it was that wish in his mind that created such fear
he made a wish to god
if his love is true,then god grant him what he desires
the wish was whever his beloved cry,
all her tears transformed into diamonds
god did grant him his wish
in anxiety to verify
he went to his beloved and slapped her,
so shocked by this sudden treatment,she started crying
it started raining outside
followed by lightining and thunderstorms,
tears started flowing her face
and as they fall on floor
they became diamonds
At this he bent on his knees and asked for forgiveness
"oh my love ,i wanted everything to be amazing about you,
i wanted your tears to be so costly
that you never shed them"
touched by this,she got more closer to him.
everything came to normal
as their love flourished more.
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2008-06-21 11:50:04]
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Re: a wish of lover
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by Chrissylee on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 12:06:54 PM AEST
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I think you have done well with your first poem to the site. I doubt you need anyone to tell you how to write just continue to write from the heart and you will do fine.
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Re: a wish of lover
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by breezyweezy on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 06:54:29 PM AEST
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| if this is your first write on this site then bravo to you, i hope you keep it up |
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Re: a wish of lover
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 07:40:11 PM AEST
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Slap me Baby, slap me!!
A lovely write... Welcome to YPDC..
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Re: a wish of lover
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by kelly_may on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 07:41:04 PM AEST
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| it has a really good story to it good job |
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