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A Tired Man
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Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 08:49:43 AM in AEST
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A Tired Man
A tired man was in need
A tired man over seen
A tired man breaking down
A tired man with no sound....
A weight so strong breaks till dawn
He bashes his hands all day long
Busting arms with blood and sweat
He gives his all till all has met....
A tired man was in despair
He don't give a damn who's to care
A tired man goes undone
A tired man strives number one...
For he who quits looses the most
I'm still here working the post
As I yearn to reach but your not there
That's ok I took my dare...
A tired man is going to care
Because this tired man wants to share
His everlastion story of so true
It's your love sweetpea, I fell into
And that's why I work
The way I do,
This tired man..................
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Re: A Tired Man
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by Supercreep on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 02:07:55 AM AEST
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Interesting poem. Liked the repetion which gives the poem a sort of rhythmic plod as the tired man carries on despite all odds.
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Re: A Tired Man
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by kelly_may on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 03:42:25 AM AEST
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| nicley done an intresting story that rymes well good job x x kely |
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