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Finally
Contributed by
kittygurl
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Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 08:24:48 AM in AEST
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I'd looked so long and far
But none of them were up to par.
I gave up, I said "I'm done,
For me there are surely none"
I felt defeated, bewildered, and down
And I had nothing to wear but a frown
Then I saw him in a different light
Then everything seemed just so right
Why hadn't I seen him before?
More than any other I wanted him more
Before I didn't look at him twice
And now I see he's really that nice
It seemed to come from above,
For I think I've finally found true love.
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2008-06-21 08:24:48]
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Re: Finally
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by 143 on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 08:52:17 AM AEST
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That is extreamly beautiful!!!
...It's so rare to hear women express love in that way anymore!
"Stand Tall, Always"
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Re: Finally
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by ek_da_poet on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 09:27:45 AM AEST
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i liked this piece alot, it flowed very nicely, ill keep my eyes open for more of ur work
take cares,"
ek da poet
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Re: Finally
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by lovely_poet on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 11:27:26 AM AEST
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| you have portrayed a feeling of ur heart anf of a girl so nicely. |
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Re: Finally
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by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 11:48:38 PM AEST
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Great write, good flow, But I'm a sucker for rhyming and I guess I'm just in the mood for a romance peom
anyway great write
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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