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Foolish Flesh
Contributed by
safetyinnumbers
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Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:31:54 AM in AEST
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The foolish flesh of humanity
feels solid in its sanity
and I hold it in my hand
while a certain thirst demands
I hold it above my lips
and squeeze it into a fist
and let liquid love bleed
between my fingers and teeth
of what I can see it is surreal
and this liquid love spills
a certain magic in my mind
that in the end leaves me blind
for all I sadly receive
is a taste of a bitter disease
that spits its black into my soul
and leaves me so very cold.
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2008-06-20 06:31:54]
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Re: Foolish Flesh
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:36:41 AM AEST
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kind of makes you dizzy reading it
interesting post
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Re: Foolish Flesh
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:53:42 AM AEST
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Interesting analogy..... nicely done...
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