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Dedicated run
Contributed by
recklessguy
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Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 04:32:13 AM in AEST
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I find myself a lonely guy,
it was by my own choice.
I did not want to explore enough
into matter of the heart.
Out here on the road
with the cb for my noise
I find myself searching deep
for things I wish to avoid.
Then the little lass
creeps slowly in my mind.
I cannot get past
those haunting big brown eyes.
She is the death of me.
She will never be mine.
A friend tried and true
bounded by the right choice.
I stick to the dedicated run
straight and narrow as I go
it doesn't hurt once in awhile
to just dream and wish it so.
Or maybe a twin
that would be a perfect fit
someone to share the joy
and tender sentiment.
I am off again......
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Re: Dedicated run
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 05:11:34 AM AEST
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Oh you should never feel lonely hun.
I do know the road will do it every time though.
As far as the twin, do you remember the evil one?
LOL mmmmmm that would not be a good fit, she looked just like me but we were opposite as night and day. Remember all the trouble I was in because of the bad stuff she had been doing? Do you know after all that time I was the only one who never did find her?
Remember the day I went out a hunting for her LOL?
I love ya
Michelle
the little horned beachhhhhh anyway ROFLMAO
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Re: Dedicated run
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 05:29:58 AM AEST
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It's gotta be a rough life, especially these days. I commend you.
Great write. The heart is one strange animal and I deeply felt it through your words.
Mike
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Re: Dedicated run
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:16:39 AM AEST
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This is deep.... one can feel the loneliness in it... Good write..
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