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Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 08:11:08 PM in AEST
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Upon ashen pages waiting for words to come
Yet eyes and mouth have become blind and dumb
With a prick to the finger crimson letters begin to flow
With knowledge and wisdom what exactly does this mind know
Pain and regret like a coat that cant be hung at the entry gate
Hanging heavily around the neck, for repentance and remorse it might be too late
For the ashen pages taped upon the wall tell the recent tale
Of attempts at rekindling an ancient feud but time after time seem to fail
Satan and his bride whisper into wounded ear
Hoping that their lies the hardened heart will hear
With a pistol in one hand and a deafening sound ringing in your head
One last thought escapes you as you take your last breath, you’re dead
2008
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2008-06-19 20:11:08]
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Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 03:36:08 AM AEST
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Rich,
once again the pain and the words are breaking my heart. Please do not do this.
Pain and regret like a coat that cant be hung at the entry gate........ I feel the same way right now.
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Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath
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by recklessguy on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 04:21:03 AM AEST
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WOOOOW dude,
I hope you are writing feelings out and are not gonna act on this. Do not do it.
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Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 09:48:39 PM AEST
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Yet again your writing amazes me. Simple, definate words that ring loud and clear. Welcome to my yard, where you MUST hang your coat at the gate, We are all equal here.
Your Friend,
Deadwriter
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Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 05:53:06 AM AEST
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This is so sad and heart breaking... I hope things are better for you soon...
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Jenni |
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Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath
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by safetyinnumbers on
Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 05:57:21 PM AEST
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Nice write....I enjoyed it....Anthony |
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