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Low Battery

Contributed by texasw97 on Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 01:06:56 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

It’s not hard to tell that I’m hurting on the inside
I’m down with no one to talk to or nowhere to hide
I’m still asking my favorite question why
I’m feeling so bad I just want to cry
Who am I kidding I can not tell a lie
Deep down I really want to just die
Why oh why must I feel this way
I constantly feel like crap every day
I shed a tear as I look in the mirror
Wondering if this picture is going to get any clearer
My appearance is back to that of a beast
No matter the pie I do not want to eat
I believe all them are played out just to say the least
I’m better off just beating my meat
I want so badly to escape
But it’s hard when I feel like a crushed grape
Not like those that are used for wine
Because I’m feeling just the opposite of fine
More like the ones that are pushed to the gutter
I’m down once again I did not stutter

Copyright © texasw97 ... [ 2008-06-19 13:06:56]
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Re: Low Battery (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 09:28:24 AM AEST
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Incredible sadness in this write.
I hope things improve for you.
It is a good write but it is painful to read since
you are so sad.

Michelle

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