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~One last dance~
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 06:29:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My love, I cannot escape your wanting, charms and need
to take me to the world where I will never sleep.
Escaping the grips of my mortal pain, I wait for you.
I see the pale moon rising, above the haunted trees.
I shall never feel alone or feel the need of want.
Forever strolling in your evil arms, a mistress of late midnight.
Becoming a mere ghost of the woman I once was.
Strolling within the shadows of crimson tides.
Twined by your blood, our sickness our sin.
You come to me, I smell the scent of musk.
Looking at you one would not see the vampire behind the charm.
One last dance my love, before my breath turns to ice.
I shall rise again, once you taste away my life.
Share your eternal fever as it runs through my veins.
My voice to fade away to all who knew me, a mere whisper on the wind.
The music fades away, the darkness turns to a brief shroud.
I feel your fire inside of me, I drop my silken red gown.
Forever is eternal, my heart beats with the rhythm of you.
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Re: ~One last dance~
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by recklessguy on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 06:53:21 AM AEST
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Hey thats not fair! Can I be the vampire?
I will cut that out, you are good at these.
Steamed up the windows darlin.
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Re: ~One last dance~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 07:11:03 AM AEST
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Well, I don't do vampires but as usual you
You captured your subject well.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ~One last dance~
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by Emily313 on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 07:24:48 AM AEST
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| Forever strolling in your evil arms, a mistress of late midnight. Becoming a mere ghost of the woman I once was... Loved those lines. and the poem was amazing, absolutely great. Keep writing more. ~Emily~ |
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Re: ~One last dance~
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 08:26:11 AM AEST
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Like Emy, I don't do vampires but this write held me in a trance.. lol
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Re: ~One last dance~
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by holy on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 12:21:16 PM AEST
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| I come from China, thank you again. |
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Re: ~One last dance~
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by Chrissylee on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 02:55:05 PM AEST
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I can feel the romance in this emy and the want and need that she wants to be with him eternally once again a great write.
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Re: ~One last dance~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 04:12:57 PM AEST
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It took alot for me to read one of your writes again...it is as beautiful as always.
Rich |
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Re: ~One last dance~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 06:03:58 AM AEST
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| Once again you have stunned us all with how beautiful a picture you paint, your words are just beautiful, beautiful!!!!........Mike |
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