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Ahmed
Contributed by
cutey
on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you are my dream come true
love,hopes,and dreams you
are my world my life you mean
every thing to me you are my
shinning bright star so very high
up in the sky you are so very great
kind,caring,loving so honest that is
what i love about you have giving me
the most in portion thing in life that
was our dreams and i want to thank
you for that sweetie you are sweeter
then honey taste better then sugar
smell so much sweeter then the best
American beauty rose out there.
Copyright ©
cutey
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2003-03-15 08:00:00]
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Re: Ahmed
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 12:39:49 AM AEST
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| wow! this is so neat! did you mean to make it look like a honey pot!? even though the end words in the line do not rhyme per say, the whole thing has a lovely flow, *goes to kitchen for some honey* |
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Re: Ahmed
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:03:14 AM AEST
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| I liked this too... the way it just all flowed out in one big breath ... cute .... :))) Jan |
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Re: Ahmed
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by Apartment213 on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 12:47:25 AM AEST
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| right it does resemble a honey pot very clever. not to mention very loving and poetic, u show some talent here. |
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