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Animal
Contributed by
ravensofthedark
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Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 08:23:23 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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This beast inside of me will not hide,
Every time it tries to break these chains I feel the forthcoming of many hells,
So I lock it away in this cage where it shall reside,
At the heart of my control is where it impels,
The animal in the center of my chest, howling for freedom once more,
As the rage wells up, I pant harder, this demon taking over as I hit the floor.
The storm of hatred destroys the land; while I try to repair the destruction,
Like wolves hunting, I seek out my tormenters and return the knife they put in me,
With the sickness of revenge, I look into the fear filled eyes, it feels like seduction,
Remembering what I am, trying to regain control, with a final plea,
My eyes burning with the soul of this demon, I’ve lost control in full possession,
Still pulverizing my lines of enemies swiftly, not yet ready for regression
Events start to fade, the black shroud calling my mind to rest,
Waking to remember nothing, only hearing screams,
Increasing pulses as I stare into the pain of their eyes, this vengeance is worn like a crest,
Through all pretenses, I see the void that used to be their dreams.
My head swimming with myriads of thoughts, as I try to find her,
The dark rage rushes to a stop, the look in her eyes upon my hidden shame recur.
The still frame of tranquility flows back in to place,
I seal this animal back, after all the problems it caused, everything from it gone awry,
Her lightest touch I let go of my chaos, I hide my disgrace,
Though this ferocious beast hates the cage it attempts to defy,
Every time I’m with my love, I cannot let this devil show,
With her, I cannot remember the pain I felt so long ago.
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ravensofthedark
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2008-06-18 20:23:23]
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Re: Animal
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 02:11:05 AM AEST
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This poem was so brilliant. I like the emotions, the harsh raw pain from your anger that you feel...The words just hit you and the last two lines of this poem is amazing... It is like she is the only release you have over this anger.
Well done
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Re: Animal
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 09:23:15 AM AEST
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We are two different people but I swear we are really of one mind. I have been feeling this way myself lately. AWESOME WRITE!
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