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Nickotine
Contributed by
ediii
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Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 05:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A cigarette
Lit with desire
The red burns toward
The end sighs
Into hissing snakes
Curling up-
Watch the light get killed.
Why do we crave cigarettes
Knowing
They kill us in the end?
Copyright ©
ediii
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2008-06-18 17:52:19]
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Re: Nickotine
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 06:56:44 PM AEST
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Great analogy..... I loved this..
Often wonder the same thing myself..
Jenni |
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Re: Nickotine
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by Miseria on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 05:29:51 AM AEST
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| Well written. Cigarettes are an abomination. They're pointless. I have never smoked in my life and I never will. Thumbs up. |
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Re: Nickotine
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 12:35:38 AM AEST
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| It is only humanity to do something (like love) when it may hurt us in the end. This is brilliant and I have become a fan. |
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