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Dancing in the shadows of sorrow
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 04:38:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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~Hearts lay broken on the path, the path of destruction~
They are shattered and the blood runs out as the mirror breaks.
~Hearts that need replenishing from the poison that was filled~
The spirit, wounded falls to the ground from the deep seated ache.
We dance through the wounded wood in the rains of our sorrow
~Cold stone beneath the feet, the hardness reaches up the legs~
The stone that was cast caught cold and hard near the heart.
~Wounded to the very core, falling down in a slumbering heap~
Wave the flag of you have won, another penetrating defeat.
The trail of tears lead to us dancing in the rains of our sorrow
~Hearts are shattering and holding on to thin strings~
Each breath of life is slowing dying and the cracks will make life cease.
~A canopy of formed pain, the shroud of dark decay~
The heart in need of mending but it may now be to late.
We dance through the wounded wood in the rains of our sorrow
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Re: Dancing in the shadows of sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 05:13:43 AM AEST
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| Michelle, another beautiful write. Though such deep sadness lies within..........Mike |
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Re: Dancing in the shadows of sorrow
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 06:20:38 AM AEST
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Michelle,
So sad were the emotions running through my heart as I read this. Great write.
Deadwriter
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Re: Dancing in the shadows of sorrow
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 06:43:12 AM AEST
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I can feel the sadness and pain overflowing in this gem of a write.....
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Re: Dancing in the shadows of sorrow
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 06:58:17 AM AEST
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| beautiful words from you as always...awsome write. |
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Re: Dancing in the shadows of sorrow
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by rollingon4you on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 02:15:39 AM AEST
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This to shall pass baby.
I love you.
I think you are prettier than your angel graphic also.
Wink
Love ya babe
Gar |
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Re: Dancing in the shadows of sorrow
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by recklessguy on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 07:40:16 AM AEST
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No sorrow for you darlin.
Sad but pretty poem.
10-4
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