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Untitled
Contributed by
queenofcamelot
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Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 11:11:32 PM in AEST
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All the sadness and pain comes out in the wet on my cheeks
And in the sounds of my sobs
The pain washes away like water in a sink
through my tears
But the water is never really truly gone, its always there
And the sadness that never leaves me for a minute
It is like a second shadow forever there
A constant and mostly unseen compainion
Both with me till my last tears fall
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Re: Untitled
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 11:27:36 PM AEST
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you have painted a picture of formed pain here. Sad but nicely done.
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Re: Untitled
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 01:01:22 AM AEST
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You have painted a sad picture through a beautifully and brilliantly written poem. I am sorry for your pain.
I hope things begin to look up for you.
thank you for your comment.
Rich
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