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There You Were
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 09:41:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There you were standing by bus stopping place,
the place where I return e’er day’s work’s o’er.
When I stepped low a smile now graced your face,
such smile as I had never seen before.
Then you took my hand giving fingers squeeze,
your hold and gentle ways delighting me.
And walking home the news did surly please,
for I was told young father I would be.
Would child of my youth be girl, I think male,
whatever gender mattered least it seemed.
God’s great gift hoping strongly I’d not fail,
good kind of parent yoked with wife well teamed.
Her smile was wondrous having news to say,
Soon revelation made a joyous day.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2008-06-17 09:41:08]
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Re: There You Were
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 10:24:52 AM AEST
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Oh my friend such happy news. I can feel your joy and excitement. I am so happy for you. What a lucky guy!
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Re: There You Were
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 02:46:55 AM AEST
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Congratulations.... I am happy for you..
You could feel the beams of your happiness and joy throughout this poem...
Take care and stay healthy
Christina |
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Re: There You Were
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by MorguesMatter on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 11:31:07 AM AEST
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| That's a wonderful poem because it makes you feel the love of a babies touch without ever being there-Morgues |
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