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The Edge Of Nowhere..*
Contributed by
hannah_heaven
on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 06:08:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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at the edge of nowhere
and the beginning of anywhere
there lays a mysterious forest
that only the most vivid imaginations can explore
this isnt a place for the light hearted
it takes full belief to enter such a place
and true concept of fantasy..
on the land
the creatures roam free and untouched by any man
as men dont exist in such a place
only pure souls
dryads fly from tree to tree
playful or helpful
depending on their mood
unicorns
visible to only true believers
protector of the forests
no snow will lay
no winter will come
it is only spring
beautiful warm,
centaurs watch the skies,
they are pure
all stars shine brighter here
its a different world to ours,
in the waters mermaids live
they speak every language to man
mermish, crustacean
of course there are faries
nympths and spirits
simurg flies above,
the jewl of the skies
at the edge of nowhere
and beginning of anywhere
there lays a land untouched by man
unentered..
just waiting, for you.
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hannah_heaven
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2008-06-17 06:08:39]
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Re: The Edge Of Nowhere..*
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 06:11:16 AM AEST
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Wonderful. So visual and warm. A land untouched by man....how wonderful, how magnificent, how perfect. The only thing is I read and don't want man (including myself) to touch it. It's a glorious place you've painted with words.
BRAVO
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Re: The Edge Of Nowhere..*
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 06:24:17 AM AEST
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You have brought forth a mystical write here. Land of enchantment.... You made me smile with this one.
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Re: The Edge Of Nowhere..*
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 06:28:38 PM AEST
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Ahh A Shore of Tranquility..... So very peaceful and serene there.... This left me feeling so wonderful... Thank you..
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Re: The Edge Of Nowhere..*
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by Supercreep on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 10:47:42 PM AEST
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| This is lovely. Really lyrical. Perhaps I'll have to write a song about it! Has cheered up a long and weery day of work. Carry on believing in mystery. I am well impressed that you are just 17... |
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