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The Life and Death of a Thunderstorm
Contributed by
trini
on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 03:06:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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It began
Not the little blue drops in kindergarten pictures
But rather, a white streak.
Jumping from it's cloudy comfort.
Almost deafening,
Popping corn in the summer heat
Trees try to protect their unders
But we cut ours down
So the driveway got wet
You could hear it when you got inside
It called me back
So I politely obliged
Within seconds it stopped it's tantalizing beat
Sensing my presence
And I watched the sun turn it back
To it's brethren, the mist.
Copyright ©
trini
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2008-06-17 03:06:45]
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Re: The Life and Death of a Thunderstorm
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 05:15:38 AM AEST
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| Very beautifully penned piece. Last 4 line make it complete. Great write............Mike |
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Re: The Life and Death of a Thunderstorm
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 05:59:55 AM AEST
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Amazing how this all came together.. well done...
Jenni |
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Re: The Life and Death of a Thunderstorm
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by mecatpurrson on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 01:49:04 AM AEST
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| Very nice title, it's what drew me in. And I liked your line "To its brethren, the mist." Kudos. |
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