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Angel Smiles
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 01:27:09 AM in AEST
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She smiles the heart melts.
Like raindrops running wild.
Always near, heart of gold
Pure as winters driven snow.
We all have angels near by.
When roads are long,
and winds moan soft through spring tree's
Angel smiles is all we need.
It is love that brings life to living.
Angel smiles and warmth of hugs.
Driving away the lonely moments
Angel smiles calling all home.
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shelby
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2008-06-17 01:27:09]
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Re: Angel Smiles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 01:41:06 AM AEST
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" It is love that brings life to living "
Love the line above, a most wise observation
indeed, beautiful co write, and of course, you
girl are never short on artistry par excellance.
ty also 4 your read shell . . .
((((Michelle))))
true blue buddy Ben . . .
it's on your site as well already . . . lol.
take care . . .
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Re: Angel Smiles
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by MTJohnson on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 02:12:13 AM AEST
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Ooo, I like it. I love the softness and mellowness of it and the quiet and softly encouraging repitition of "smiles". Particularly good are "Like raindrops running wild" - creative image and good to get your mouth round; and "winds moan soft through spring tree's" which sounds exactly like the soft moan.
Thanks for the comment on How Time Flies and no worries, any comment is welcome! =)
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Re: Angel Smiles
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by SPSM on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 03:13:29 AM AEST
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Such a lovely poem
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Re: Angel Smiles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 05:06:13 AM AEST
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| a very peaceful poem it's nice, i like it |
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Re: Angel Smiles
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by recklessguy on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 07:47:48 AM AEST
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Thanks hun, I love the angel smiles.
Me |
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Re: Angel Smiles
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by safetyinnumbers on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 04:52:34 PM AEST
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Nice write....we all need angels....so true.....Safetyinnumbers |
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Re: Angel Smiles
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by Catalina on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 01:47:49 AM AEST
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| I enoyed this ! beautiful |
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