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Glowing eyes
Contributed by
HellRaiser
on
Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 09:52:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Red eyes glow in the shadows
as they hunt
the prey of past days
by the smell
of the bloody lacerations
carved into my flesh.
A bell chimes faintly away from curious eyes.
The glowing eyes shut
leaving blinding darkness
that engulfs all paths
pushing my limits
and throwing me into denial.
A bell chimes faintly away from curious eyes.
The black hound creeps
from behind
only to set me
into panic
and to throw disbelieve in all directions,
the hound attacks.
A bell chimes faintly away from curious eyes.
The black hound pounces
biting my arm
with eternal hold
and endless will,
the glowing eyes meet mine.
A bell chimes faintly away from curious eyes.
Wounding pains
lies deep within glowing eyes
which feast
and devour
on such souls ignorance
with no remorse.
A bell chimes faintly away from curious eyes.
The black hound relived
of eternal hold
thus
mutating my mind
and being;
giving rise to my consciousness
Copyright ©
HellRaiser
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2008-06-16 21:52:55]
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Re: Glowing eyes
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by Muinanyere on
Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 11:49:58 PM AEST
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| I like how you wrote this, it's a really interesting piece, the reader can't help but be enshrouded in this. Good write. |
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Re: Glowing eyes
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 01:53:24 AM AEST
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Glowing eyes give me chills and the dark hound ooooo makes me shiver. I agree I was taken aback and all wrapped up in it.
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