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Ungodly smell
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 07:49:02 AM in AEST
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one of my dogs died today we expected it but he is the first dog that i was there when it happened. I had to help carry him to
be buried I have never smelt anything so bad in my life.
Do you smell that ungodly smell
the smell of something rotting in the pits of hell
But no that is when we found my dog dead
and the smell is that which is coming from his decaying head
But this dog is not bound for hell
but from now on as a reminder like a bell in my head
that ungodly smell
will never leave my mind so to me he's not dead
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Re: Ungodly smell
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 01:01:56 AM AEST
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I am sorry for the loss of your pet. The smell of death is someting that lasts a long time in the memory and can be triggered by a wide range of things.
Deadwriter
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Re: Ungodly smell
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by recklessguy on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 08:18:41 AM AEST
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Sorry for the loss of your dog that bites.
I agree with above, that smell is not forgotten.
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