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whether yours or another's
Contributed by
Blue
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Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
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if i stay as i am, i am a slave
forever condemned to the weight of people's chains
if i refuse to break free then i am forever lost
to a system of slavery to other people's lust
whether yours or another's it's all the same
forever damned to spend a life under someone else's name
i remain forever what i shall always be
a face and soul both abhorrent to me.
fettered inside the chains of someone's expectations
cursed under the weight of someone's harsh damnations
now is the time to claim what i lost
buried under the price of individuality at any cost
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Re: whether yours or another's
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 10:39:08 PM AEST
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| intriging write........very appealing to me, not the feeling of opression, your poem:) |
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Re: whether yours or another's
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 02:45:55 PM AEST
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blue, i like it...its a bit over my head i guess, but it made enough sense... :O) i love your poetry...
Lindsey |
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