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~CRAZY OBSESSION~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 11:35:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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~~^~~
What's this crazy obsession
that I have over you?
I'm so confused,
I don't know what to do.
At times I'm in total control
of my emotions,
At others,
I get some very crazy notions.
What is it about you
that drives me crazy?
Whenever you're around,
my brain gets hazy.
I know this obsession
will only bring me pain.
But I love you,
And I’ll say it again and again.
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
... [
2008-06-13 23:35:54]
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Re: ~CRAZY OBSESSION~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 11:42:51 PM AEST
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| this is a good write |
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Re: ~CRAZY OBSESSION~
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by deadwriter on
Saturday, 14th June 2008 @ 01:00:31 AM AEST
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Great write Jenni.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~CRAZY OBSESSION~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th June 2008 @ 06:10:25 AM AEST
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| Jenni, to me, finding someone who always keeps your attention in those ways is one to hold on to. Great write.........Mike |
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Re: ~CRAZY OBSESSION~
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by holy on
Saturday, 14th June 2008 @ 11:29:52 AM AEST
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Great job, my dear sister.
Short but to the point, it really express your real emotions, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: ~CRAZY OBSESSION~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 05:40:42 AM AEST
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OH boy, do I reLATE!!
lol
Jenni, this was so real and brave. So many won't even admit to
themselves that someone has a hold of their heart and soul.
A lovely little piece of honest inward searching ..
refreshing ~
~Breezy
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Re: ~CRAZY OBSESSION~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 07:37:19 AM AEST
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| Your feelings were expressed well in this poem. Great job! |
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Re: ~CRAZY OBSESSION~
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by spooky on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 08:00:50 PM AEST
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a careing heart ,,,you have,, well written,,
a friend in words ,,spooky |
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Re: ~CRAZY OBSESSION~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 03:27:02 AM AEST
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Well written, well expressed.
You took a short poem yet filled it in depth and put a lot of emotion into it..
Well done
Take care
Christina |
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