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Can you?
Contributed by
lost_again
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Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 08:43:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Can you feel the heart
right from the start
and pour your soul
in part or whole
to stave your pain
and love the same
without expectations
not seeking gain
finding the bloom
beneath the thorn
kissing in kindness
when another is forlorn
embellishing beauty
with each step you take
without stepping on hearts
and making them break.
Can you?
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Re: Can you?
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by little_genna on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 09:34:25 AM AEST
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you managed to say so much with so few words. i love it. these are all the questions ive been asking myself recently... kinda weird how this is the first poem i read on one of my random readings...
great job, thanks for taking the time to share.
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Re: Can you?
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 09:40:29 AM AEST
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You know I can. You took this to the higher level.
I think a lot of people should read this and get a clue, know what I mean??
I know you can!
Hug and kiss
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Re: Can you?
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 07:51:39 PM AEST
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Very good piece. I agree many people should read this and let it sink in.
Deadwriter
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