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Birthed From Divinity
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The Goddess birthed an angel
Whose wings were made of pure divinity
Lounging around on his cloud
He loved to make the other angels laugh
But at night when all was quiet
He just stared up at the stars above him
He thought they were beautiful
He knew that with them was where he belonged
The Goddess made all the stars
But some of them, they dreamed a little more
They loved to dance, twinkling bright
They were the most carefree souls in the sky
But at night when all was still
They gazed down at this one certain angel
Because they knew he loved them
They wished for a way to belong with him
The Goddess saw this and knew
She had to let these souls be together
She knew they'd find each other
Because She wrote it in their destiny
So She gave the angel back
To live again and find his love someday
And She sent those stars to Earth
And everybody saw them falling down
Now eighteen-plus years later
A boy found a girl and then they found love
And he saw stars in her eyes
And then she saw his invisible wings
They knew that they belonged
They knew they'd be together forever
He could always make her laugh
And she knew he'd loved her from a distance
That's why I'm with my angel
Because it was always meant to be
Just a boy and just a girl
But birthed from divinity, the gods' will
We'll always be together
And the heavens will smile down on us
There's nothing more beautiful
Than two blessed souls finding their destiny
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-03-14 23:40:00]
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Re: Birthed From Divinity
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 01:26:09 AM AEST
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| very beautiful.. very good write... |
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Re: Birthed From Divinity
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by venkat on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 05:50:51 AM AEST
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| " And he saw stars in her eyes and then she saw his invisible wings".. very beautiful link for continuation of the story. " there is nothing more beautiful than blessed souls finding their destiny" ..nice conclusion . well done... venkat |
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Re: Birthed From Divinity
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:06:06 AM AEST
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| ooohh love it, your story is adorable! huggs n' love always nessa |
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Re: Birthed From Divinity
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by Emmie74 on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 03:56:32 AM AEST
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wow... I'm like, speechless. This is such a good story thing. lol... I'm not sure if I should call it a story or a poem. Anyway, It's like, really really good.
Love always,
Em |
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Re: Birthed From Divinity
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 04:03:46 AM AEST
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| precious and visual... i love the way you unfolded the story... blessings... |
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Re: Birthed From Divinity
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:24:58 AM AEST
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Wow!!
"And he saw stars in her eyes
And then she saw his invisible wings"....
I have to agree with venkat... those lines are soo beautiful... all the best! :) |
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Re: Birthed From Divinity
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 10:02:17 AM AEST
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So well done on this poem,very beautiful!
Christina |
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