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Abstract this Life
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 04:13:57 AM in AEST
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abstract
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Betwixt these lines, I sense foreboding
Of unspoken words I am supposing
Where things now done, may bring you dismay
What change would you have made I say?
For what is done , cannot be replaced
And in history it must be placed
Among the memories of times gone by
Where regrets don't give us reasons why
In passive dreams we remember times
Where life is never just sublime
To look for answers we never found
To find the truth on thorny ground
To make real your dream of your hope
Doth give you fortitude to cope
For what this life , if full of care
We must try and we must dare
To live our dreams no matter what
Be thankful for all that we have got
If we do not, I fear we will fail
Into the darkness, into the pale
So in your dreams we now must seek
A future bright, to allay the bleak
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jerseysue
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Re: Abstract this Life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 06:00:14 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write. Makes you think with each line..........Mike |
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Re: Abstract this Life
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 08:07:13 AM AEST
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Very thought-provoking write..... makes me realise I need to start dreaming again...
Thanks for sharing it..
Jenni |
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Re: Abstract this Life
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 09:20:54 AM AEST
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I loved this, so good to see you again.
I would say live your dreams, dare to dream them be thankful for even the smallest things for one day they be gone.
Maybe Im off with that.
Lovely work
Michelle |
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Re: Abstract this Life
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 06:40:20 PM AEST
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so true, exceptional writing, so beautiful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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