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Portals for Mortals
Contributed by
screwge
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Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 03:33:58 AM in AEST
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Watch people filter into coves
By the unabashed, motley droves
In hopes of finding other side,
But bulls in China’s shop collide.
They weep upon the solid bulwark
Without the pores to blast and uncork –
And poke a hole right through the earth,
Malleable patches somewhat dearth.
And do not see a throbbing lantern,
But only lava in its cistern,
Like a toxic and ironic vat,
And this fiery core can fall so flat.
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2008-06-13 03:33:58]
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Re: Portals for Mortals
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by recklessguy on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 07:55:22 AM AEST
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I could almost hear a beat to this. Cool write.
Reck |
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Re: Portals for Mortals
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by little_genna on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 09:59:30 AM AEST
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it made me feel like there should be more to it... but maybe i got caught in the beat it had...
i like the two line set up... fit so well. |
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