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And the bottom falls...
Contributed by
shirls
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Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 10:57:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Downward down, clinging to inner walls...
Hanging, hanging on.
Slip.
Slip off until the downward down seemed as nothing at all...
Until sweet release, watch me fall...
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shirls
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2008-06-12 22:57:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: And the bottom falls...
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 12:04:29 AM AEST (User
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You captured the feeling of falling in a small write.
Super!
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