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Finding The One
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 03:03:03 PM in AEST
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Everyone wants to find
The one true love in their life
Sometimes the heart
Beats for the wrong person
And as hurtful as it is
It will heal and it will mend
Given time and space
It is never easy to explain
The reason behind these feelings
When the feelings have been one sided
I can only hope time
Console the aching heart
So that one day
It will be able to beat for the right person
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funnyface09
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2008-06-12 15:03:03]
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Re: Finding The One
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by reeree on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 05:32:47 PM AEST
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You'll find true love. This was a good poem
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Re: Finding The One
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 06:02:44 PM AEST
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love it! not only does the "Sometimes the heart Beats for the wrong person" line apply to love, but people's hearts also beat for the multiple wrong things in life, and I hope someday people will realize and change their ways, but i believe you're on the right track. =) good luck in the future
-K.Z.
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Re: Finding The One
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by shelby on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 10:41:09 PM AEST
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You have a lot of strength my friend. You will find the right person. You really touched my heart with this poem. Keep smiling
Michelle |
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