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~Maybe I’ve Been Insensitive~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 10:08:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Maybe I’ve never lost a friend or a lover
Maybe I’ve never lost a spouse.
But I know what it feels like
To see both my parents die in our house.
Maybe I’ve never felt the pang of loneliness
That you write about so well.
Maybe I don’t know what it’s like
To exist within a shell.
Maybe I’ve never felt alone like you.
Because I’ve known love all my life.
But I know the pain of losing a baby
And being a childless wife.
I know how much you are suffering
That much I can understand.
But it wouldn’t hurt too much
To accept a helping hand.
So maybe if I seem a bit insensitive
Or perhaps appear to no longer care,
Know that it’s only because
I, myself, am trying to hide a tear.
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-06-11 22:08:19]
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Re: ~Maybe I’ve Been Insensitive~
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 10:27:22 PM AEST
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| awsome write. thank you for saying this. people spend their lives complaining about how much their life has sucked..and they think their the only ones with problems and pain. your words are so full of truth and emotion. bravo. |
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Re: ~Maybe I’ve Been Insensitive~
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by Inevitable on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 10:50:26 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this. It was very interesting and I liked it. |
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Re: ~Maybe I’ve Been Insensitive~
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 11:21:20 PM AEST
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This is a great write Jenni. It is nice to know people are here to help us, but we must also remember that they may be hurting and in need of some help themselves.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Maybe I’ve Been Insensitive~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 11:52:38 PM AEST
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| Great write Jenni. I feel very lucky to have friends, such as you, that care enough to help when needed...........Mike |
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Re: ~Maybe I’ve Been Insensitive~
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by shelby on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 05:24:07 AM AEST
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Those of us who have been your friend for years do know how much you care Jen. You have always had a way of making the pen sing your hearts song. For that and many other reasons is why I just love the heck out of you my sweet sweet Jen.
Hugs
beautiful poem
Michelle |
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Re: ~Maybe I’ve Been Insensitive~
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 10:19:56 PM AEST
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Jenni,
This is fantastic...excellent writing. I love it.
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