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What Have You Done?
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 10:00:33 PM in AEST
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What Have You Done?
I ran along the beach next to the ocean so blue
Trying so hard to catch up to you
You told me we were like ships passing in the night
This day my love has abandoned ship and has taken flight
Soaring high above the loneliness of the world today
There is so much I want to tell you, but I have to find the way
I know I am close to you, to see you won’t take long
Because I hear the echoes of your beautiful song
Though hundreds of ladies each week I see
Snuggled tight with you is exactly where I long to be
I know you find this hard to accept and to believe
From your side I wish to never leave
Spotting you, I descend so together a new we may start
But as I approach you thrust a dagger through my heart
Unable to understand for you the love I felt
Remembering only the past troubles you have been dealt
Watching me die you once again feel safe and protected
My true intentions of love and desire you never detected
So it remains we were two ships that once passed in the night
My heart resting below on the ocean floor, never again to take flight
Deadwriter
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Re: What Have You Done?
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 10:13:30 PM AEST
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I am at a loss as to what to say.
Great write.
This really touched me to the very core of my being......
Hugs and Love
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Re: What Have You Done?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 11:56:01 PM AEST
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| I love the way you write. Another great one. I hope all is well..........Mike |
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Re: What Have You Done?
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by Craze on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 12:05:48 AM AEST
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Wow! For some reason when I'm listening to any of my songs you fit in with the mood IDK? But it was another killer.
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Re: What Have You Done?
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by shelby on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 02:16:21 AM AEST
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Wow, I am at a loss for words. This took me along on a journey.
There is so much to feel while reading this write.
Awesome work once again.
My heart resting below on the ocean floor, never to take flight........... geezzzzzzzzz went right to the heart.
Hugs
Michelle |
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