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The first time(*-*)(*-*)
Contributed by
holy
on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 11:37:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The first time(*-*)(*-*)
It was on May Day morning,
our factory had a trip.
On the way returned,
the bus had an accident,
my left cheek hurt.
The following evening,
you came to see me,
I told you about the story,
you listened to me quietly.
"Do you feel better now?"
you asked me with a concern.
"I am ok,
but photograpy badly,
isn't it?"
I smiled.
"Take it easy,
you will get well soon."
you placed your hand on my shoulder comfortably
"But it is a serious matter for you,
here now."
I pretended to pull a face,
and gave you a naughty look.
"Serious my foot,
why should you worry?"
suddenly,
you kissed my left cheek gently,
"Now, now, take it easy."
When I looked at you again,
you were in a silence.
I could guess,
you were not too sure if that was right,
but for me,
it was really a new surprise,
because it was the first I had your kiss......
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holy
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2008-06-11 11:37:26]
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Re: The first time(*-*)(*-*)
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 02:58:10 PM AEST
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This is a gentle and kind hearted moment caught in time. I liked it.
~Me~ |
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Re: The first time(*-*)(*-*)
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 03:51:54 PM AEST
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Oh Holy...such a sweet write.. we never forget our first kiss, do we....
Hugs
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Re: The first time(*-*)(*-*)
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by shelby on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 03:43:57 AM AEST
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Holy my friend, again you wrote another adorable poem. I must agree the first kiss ahhhhhhh.
Hugs to ya
Michelle |
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