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Tears
Contributed by
akakin
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Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 07:34:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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That night my eyes watered like a rainy day in April
The emotions that were all bottled up came out
With every tear I wiped when I couldn't stop thinking about your voice
I could hear every word you wrote
And wished I could still have the possibility of still showing affection
Your words were promising and kind
They kept me wanting to hear more
And hold you while I took every letter in
My optimism was the reason I cried because I tried hard too
Tried so hard to make a connection that was not supposed to be shaped
My eyes started to sting because as bad as I wanted and hoped for that connection
It never came
And when you're with someone in a relationship
Things are supposed to just fit
But the moment you have to force something to just work
The tears flow more because it'll never work
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akakin
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2008-06-11 07:34:40]
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 09:11:23 AM AEST
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| how sad i'm glad i read this when i did good write |
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Re: Tears
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 10:14:44 PM AEST
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| wow..what a powerfull write..you have no idea how much i relate to this as well. this is an amazing write. nicely done. |
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