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IMPRESSIONS
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 06:42:28 AM in AEST
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Impressions
If today my luck all went down hill
Let me tell you how my time I would fill
If my eyes were closed so I could no longer see
Your beautiful face my mind would remember in front of me
If I could no longer use my sense of touch
I would imagine the feel of your soft skin that I would miss so much
If I become deaf no longer to hear
My mind would replay when you whispered ‘I Love You’ in my ear
If I could no longer smell, my nose just there to breathe
The scent of your perfume would be what my mind would retrieve
If my mouth could no longer taste
The flavor of your rosy red lips my mind would embrace
If my limbs I were no longer able to use
I know you would hold me and protect me from abuse
Impressions are like fingerprints you leave from the start
These are the impressions you left in my heart
Deadwriter
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Re: IMPRESSIONS
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 06:46:41 AM AEST
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Ahhhhh this is simply breath taking. I tried to pick a very favorite line but I an unable for the entire write is lovely.
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Re: IMPRESSIONS
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 07:10:14 AM AEST
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| Love the concept and the words made me think about each set of lines. Great write........Mike |
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Re: IMPRESSIONS
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 09:36:12 AM AEST
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I am sure the recipient of this beautiful write loved it... well done, Deadwriter...
Jenni |
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Re: IMPRESSIONS
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 03:04:45 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL!!! I loved it.
~Me~ |
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