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Forever Love
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 01:41:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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From a distanced place
I am thinking about you
The world become so big
When the heart is missing someone
The heart long for the touch
For the love, for the care
And every time when I think about you
I cannot help but hope
Someday I can be in your arms
You holding and embracing me
Be someone you will love
Wishful as it is
And crazy as it sounds
I know I am in love with you
Through time and space
The love stays forever
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2008-06-10 13:41:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Forever Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 04:03:16 PM AEST (User
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Funnyface,
With some fine tuning, this would be an excellent poem.
I do get the gist of it, and I think it is just a beautiful expression of your love for that special someone.
This even made me feel good....afterall...isn't that the purpose of writers?
Again, excellent write. |
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