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Rescue
Contributed by
Thirten
on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 06:39:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Throat closing, chest heaving
Panic and paranoid
Losing all feeling
As i think of telling you
I can't bring myself to
Utter the words of truth
That could change your view
And leave me without you.
My world is so small
But I want you there
I would give it all
Just to show I care
I never meant to hurt anyone
I cant be alone anymore
I just wanted to feel some fun
I've never felt this way before
Your smile breaks my heart
Your eyes could steal my soul
Though we're miles apart
I don't feel so alone...
My lies were never intended
To disguise who i am
I lied to myself, pretended
But I can't call myself a man
If I continue to lie to you.
You deserve more than that
You deserve more than i can do
But I'm selfish and ask...
That you give me a second chance
To give you everything
I want to hold your hands
And dance with you in the rain
I want to be there for you
Rescue you from your life
Show you what I can do
Because I'll do anything for you.
Copyright ©
Thirten
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2008-06-10 06:39:30]
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Re: Rescue
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 07:14:30 AM AEST
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Beautiful and honest write.. I loved it..
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Re: Rescue
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 09:41:33 PM AEST
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This is a very good piece. I hope the message gets through.
Deadwriter
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Re: Rescue
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by eternalsunshine on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 12:56:35 AM AEST
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nice flow to it, i really enjoyed reading...
may you find courage to tell her.... |
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Re: Rescue
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 01:49:53 AM AEST
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Feeling every word of this write. The beginning really caught me. Lovely write.
Michelle |
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Re: Rescue
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 07:57:15 AM AEST
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| "Your eyes could steal my soul" What a beautiful line. Agreed, It has nice flow and it's always good to tell someone how you feel. Even if it does no good, you still get it out......Mike |
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Re: Rescue
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by Puppy on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 12:50:56 AM AEST
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wow...this is so beautiful....i loved it sooo much...i had i lil tear in my eye....great write!!!
Puppy :) |
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