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~Something Beautiful Remains~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 05:26:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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~~^~~
Have you ever felt the warmth
that lingers on the land after the sun goes down?
Have you ever marveled at the colourful seashells
left on the shore
following the recession of the tides?
Have you ever been left in awe
long after the band stops playing
but the music continues to echo in your head?
Have you ever felt that warm tingle
long after your lover has kissed you goodnight?
If you have, then you’ll realize that
After any joyful event
Something beautiful remains…
~~^~~
09.06.08
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
... [
2008-06-10 05:26:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~Something Beautiful Remains~
(User Rating: 1 ) by ratty on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 05:41:28 AM AEST (User
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After you posted this poem, something beautiful remains for people to read. Nice one! Greetings.............. |
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Re: ~Something Beautiful Remains~
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 08:41:04 AM AEST (User
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I see the definition of beautiful is our Jenni.
This left me with such peace and warmth.
You are so right........ It is the beauty in things I have been striving to cling to these days.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: ~Something Beautiful Remains~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 10:18:46 AM AEST (User
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aww i love it |
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Re: ~Something Beautiful Remains~
(User Rating: 1 ) by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 03:51:36 PM AEST (User
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Jenni,
I love this one. I'll bet this will inspire me to write something along these lines in the future.
You're right...something beautiful does remain.
Thankyou for opening my mind more.
Excellent write.
~Stephan |
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Re: ~Something Beautiful Remains~
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 06:15:12 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful thoughts. Great write my friend.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Something Beautiful Remains~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Inevitable on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 11:03:35 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful write. Yes the imagery of beauty remains in memory. |
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Re: ~Something Beautiful Remains~
(User Rating: 1 ) by wheels on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 12:35:22 AM AEST (User
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beautiful
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Re: ~Something Beautiful Remains~
(User Rating: 1 ) by julianasmommy on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 11:54:49 AM AEST (User
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this poem reminds me of all that warmth and joy i've felt after something beautiful.
it really touched me and almost made me want to cry thinking about all those happy times i sometimes push aside.
beautiful. |
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