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The mission self-destroy
Contributed by
ratty
on
Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 08:28:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Suffering mission
When,
When U suffer again
I'm alone, wakin' up with suicide thoughts
Everyday
I'm broke
Can't feed my vein, so the thoughts slip in,
again
End it
Mastermind of death
Sleepin' pills
Burning eyes
Slice it
The buildings
The trains
The water
Drowned
Copyright ©
ratty
... [
2008-06-09 20:28:59]
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Re: The mission self-destroy
(User Rating: 1 )
by MaggieMay on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 04:22:01 AM AEST
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| a poem i think everyone can relate to. I loved your line on can't feed my vein so the thoughts slip in. beautiful. nice work. |
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Re: The mission self-destroy
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 12:07:55 AM AEST
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Very touching write to read. The ending with the word placed alone Drowned is so effective here.
Michelle |
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