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Crushed
Contributed by
spike
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Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 10:26:59 AM in AEST
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Your beautiful flawed self
in all its wreckery;
to my ears, a symphony
of discord and sour notes,
but played with style.
To my eyes doggerel;
poetry on tired shelves
in books of leather, brittle bound
pages yellow with time,
but sweet verse inclined.
Your wonderful cracked heart,
seeping desperately;
the stuff of want leaking
from every pore;
I do so adore,
You.
Copyright ©
spike
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2008-06-09 10:26:59]
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Re: Crushed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 05:02:06 AM AEST
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Oh dear poet, what a crime this has sat here all week with nary a comment! I'm shocked.
Sorry to be so tardy in coming to your page but time has not been kind to me as of late. (No
sleep for the wicked ha!)
You don't often write with such romantic tendency, but when you do, you always seem to
capture the heart and soul of it. How beautiful. And to describe someone(thing ) that has not
possession of perhaps all that most would consider beautiful, but rather concentrate on what
is lovely about them(it ) is unique. And breathtakinly so! I am absolutely in love with the last
stanza. What a magnificent ode to the love of a realness that exists only when we open all of
ourselves to it. 'phew
I am left without air. If I had only one word to describe this, it would be, enveloping
kudos, spikers! You done did it again.=)
~Breezy
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Re: Crushed
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by elle on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 11:24:31 PM AEST
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| hmmm. . . |
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Re: Crushed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 02:14:34 AM AEST
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Spike,
The contradictions in this poem are beautiful and perfect. Thank you for the creation.
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