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ribbon dangling. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 07:51:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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my rose-petal skin
awaits you. . . blushed &
satin binding
sprinkled with awe. . .
facsinating.
ghosts of satiaty
traspe this garden,
fascination.
seeding desire
as they go.
we merge. . . enchanted
by the waiting.
scandalious & tantilizing
scooping star-dust vision
on each horizon
wrapped up so in
each others' night sky.
I am ribbon
dangling. . .
from the present.
sever me.
make me whole.
picture we
are shadows falling,
sculpting treasure
to behold.
shadow, the colour
of delight,
delicious favorite
of my eye.
the words that fill
the air. . . do tingle.
ting, tingling
a warning, as if I care.
I tingle. . . with a true insight.
syllable of sa voir faire.
you exhale.
I gush emotion. . .
I had a lovely
thought of you. . .
on mist so haunting & befriending
drunk with passions' residue.
oh phantom bandit,
sly, indulgent
weightless soul, surveying all,
take care.
meet yourself
half-way & back again.
juxtiposed? indeed.
truely? completely. . .
this black tune, desire
a branding. . . tatooed now
with overwhelming care.
softly, I slide
up to meet you.
my skin. . . my foe
& always aware.
always aiming,
just to tempt you
only softly
so I just. . . to tempt you,
moaning silently
a timid intensity enclosed.
spun within yesterdays' meaning,
web to capture
& hold close
an untamed butterfly
of a soul.
I belong to another ending
& dance of longing
from ages old.
a longing. . .
bain web,
never ending.
you cannot hold
my longing soul.
Copyright ©
elle
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2008-06-09 07:51:31]
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Re: ribbon dangling. . .
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by shelby on
Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 08:04:55 AM AEST
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Elle,
OMG this write about made me fall off my chair.
I am so enthralled with this write. It moved me so deeply. Gosh which part is the best, to hard to tell entire write just flowed together to make a delightful write. I am off to read it once more ahhhhhhhhhhhh
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Re: ribbon dangling. . .
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 09:57:43 PM AEST
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Elle,
Again your write has kept me spell bound from beginning to end.
Deadwriter
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Re: ribbon dangling. . .
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by LauraMary on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 08:03:25 PM AEST
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Wow.
You are extremely talented
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Re: ribbon dangling. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 09:56:17 AM AEST
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wow. amazing. the imagery once again is top class. the language you use is extraordinary, passionate but complex at the same time. world class poetry.
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