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Take a look in mirror.

Contributed by happybunnyfan on Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 04:41:35 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

If there's ever a time where you can't find me
Don't worry just sit back and see
That time will fly by without a single thought of me because you'll be
Too afraid of what i might say
When i find out that you wasted your day
Because you thought i had lot my way
When really it was you that was lost
Cause you stepped out of line to many times and that was a big cost-
To your pocket book because you tried to speak like Frost
But ended up turning into a twisted version of Plath
It was me that felt your wrath
And when you go to look outside your window to search for me-you'll realize I'm On a different path.
One I chose to see the wonders of the world
Cause my hearts been unfurled
And my minds slowly been hurled
Straight past you and your emotionless soul
Everyone should know after years of abuse isolation begins to take toll
Only to be interrupted by those who care enough to console
And give me to the strength and power
To prove to you hour by hour
How much of my life you have devoured.

You see, if there's ever a time where you can't find me
Don't worry, jut sit back and see
In the mirror, just who the monster is that made me leave.

Copyright © happybunnyfan ... [ 2008-06-09 04:41:35]
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Re: Take a look in mirror. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 04:55:47 AM AEST
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Wow I enjoyed this, Strong emotion, and the style in which you wrote the poem fit with the message and mood.

Michelle

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