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the pith
Contributed by
elle
on
Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 05:35:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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the fire that blazes. . .
the vine that grows,
the love that lingers,
the time we sow.
the narrowed pathway,
the bells that toll.
the earthen vessel,
the struggling soul.
amounts aplenty
& scarcity, too.
the face of lacking,
the overdue.
the polished valor,
now taken out.
the coup, once stiffled. . .
jump & shout.
the touch, so gentle,
belief, profound.
unbridled longing,
divine renouned.
the heart that quickens,
the pulse does race.
the simple pleasures,
the lovers' face. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2008-06-08 05:35:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the pith
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 11:11:25 AM AEST (User
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I love your rhyme scheme, and the litany of various ideas ran freely and quite well. Good write. |
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