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~This Melody~
Contributed by
Loellntrepid
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Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 02:54:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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~Can you hear tha sound by which my heart pounds like a earthquake set forth, unstopable, walls around me sent to tha ground~
~In wounder my feet to dance tha beat trained to seek solar winds I can leap~
~This melody bringing a hunger in my soul I must feed, a releasing of tha unquenchable need~
~I sing without a sound as I dream before I wake how great this song my heart makes~
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2008-06-08 02:54:33]
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Re: ~This Melody~
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 06:28:10 AM AEST
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Pretty write, like the flow.
Michelle
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Re: ~This Melody~
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by Thirten on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 12:31:53 AM AEST
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| Very interesting, unique. I really enjoy the flow of it all. |
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