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Bella
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 10:31:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Enchanting eyes
captivating my mind
making it hard
to leave you behind
until i stop breathing
until i feel no more
you ARE my heart
my one amore.
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redsleeve
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2008-06-07 22:31:31]
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Re: Bella
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by Puppy on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 11:18:17 PM AEST
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awww....i loved it!! it is beautifully writtem well done!!!
Puppy :) |
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Re: Bella
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 11:31:12 PM AEST
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Ahhh Lovely poem...shows a lot of potential..
Welcome to YPDC.. Looking forward to more of your poems...
Jenni |
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Re: Bella
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by elle on
Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 04:58:06 AM AEST
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| the title you chose is one of my favorite words in the world. I love the way it rolls from ones' mouth. & what follows is enchanting. . .peace. elle |
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Re: Bella
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by wheels on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:49:10 AM AEST
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I like this - it is short but really gets across a full emotion.
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond |
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Re: Bella
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by LauraMary on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:38:36 PM AEST
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This is beautiful.
The simplicity of it makes it even more so.
Wonderous. |
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