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peace be your journey
Contributed by
riverofwords
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Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
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no matter how far you are away from me i am with your heart
and in the hard places you must walk,when tired .left your head listen for my whispers of love in the wind
peace be your journey until you are safe home
a light will burn in my window until you return
peace be your journey until then
when you are low in spirit at night ,look at the sky ,see the brightest star shine ..that is me sending a smile to lift your weariness
in the crowded places you must walk
remember the quiet of our embrace
peace be your journey until you are safe home
a light will burn in my window until you return
peace be your journey until then
when things get tough and hope is low
when the road is long and journey never ending
look at my picture and love remembered will hope renew
peace be your journey until you are safe home
a light burn in my window until your return
peace be your journey my love
until you are in my arms again
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Re: peace be your journey
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by FLTulip on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 06:48:49 PM AEST
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| Very comforting poem. :) Thanks for sharing |
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Re: peace be your journey
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 09:27:34 PM AEST
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very beutiful my husband traveled for years this touched home thank you
Sharon |
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Re: peace be your journey
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by venkat on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 03:27:15 AM AEST
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| excellent write, " a light will burn in my window until you return' gives a neat picture of a lady who awaits her husband. ' see the brightest star shine.. thats me sending a smile to lift you' very apt, since the wanderer watches the stars when he is walking alone to find the time, ' when the road is long..look at my picture and the love remembered will renew hope" well said. this poem wonderfully describes the feelings of a lady who could be an inspiration to her husband and who is also a beloved to her husband.. excellent poem. I feel fourth stanza is unnecessarily. it hinders the thought flow. I truly enjoye this poem. venkat |
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Re: peace be your journey
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 07:36:19 PM AEST
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| lovely poem and a great comfort to myself and many more who read it!! |
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Re: peace be your journey
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:10:49 AM AEST
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| this gives a sense of warmth and comfy happiness to me, the star sending a smile is devine, ty, huggs nessa |
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Re: peace be your journey
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 02:11:56 AM AEST
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| You have such a soothing way of writing ... calming to the soul ... enjoyed this poem immensely ... Jan |
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Re: peace be your journey
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by Tanna on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 10:52:58 AM AEST
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| This is comforting , and very sweet. I can imagine whispering this to someone I love before they travel. Excellent write Terry :) |
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