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Sunflower Sings For a Better Day

Contributed by eternalsunshine on Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 07:12:58 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

she wakes up in the morning
and opens the window of today
the sun greets her with a blush on her cheeks
while she kisses him with a her smile of beauty...

she sees the day like a blooming flower
and opens the door of the world...
she steps back
in fear...
tears dropping from her leafs
feeding the lakes...

and she starts to sing...
as the tears roll down on her cheeks
washing the red blush down on her face
while the world opens the door
grey clouds paint black streaks on her cheeks...

she keeps singing...
she sings for the sun
while the sun evaporates her fear
and tears from her eyes,
promising a new day
that it shall be all right
never fear the day....

so the sun starts to sing
little girl, close your eyes
don't shed another tear
let the days pass by
and shine your beauty...

open your eyes of your heart
where flowers bloom endlessly
evaporating their sent
to shine upon the world to see...

that there is hope of one
where it all begins...
color the days with your tint
like the rainbow of vast colors
emanating from the deep blue see,
as my rays and your tears collide
where beauty begins...

Copyright © eternalsunshine ... [ 2008-06-07 07:12:58]
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Re: Sunflower Sings For a Better Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 07:50:04 AM AEST
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It's interesting how you blended optimisn with pessimism and made it all sound so wonderful... Lovely write....
Jenni

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