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Stop And Smell The Flowers
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 05:50:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Lying in a meadow of sweet smelling flowers
Listening to the cool, clear water, running gently over river rocks
The soft breeze caresses my face
Allowing my mind to go blank
A wave of tranquility overtakes my body
My eyes look towards the Heavens
I see unfamiliar faces in the wispy clouds
Inhaling the earthy scent below me
I feel a sense of harmony with nature
Oh, a little butterfly flutters by
This brings a huge smile to my lips
Closing my eyes now
Listening to my favourite songs
Playing in my head
Ahhh
Serenity at last
A feeling of calm envelops me
As I drift into a peaceful slumber
~~^~~
06.06.08
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-06-07 05:50:01]
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Re: Stop And Smell The Flowers
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by ratty on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 06:03:54 AM AEST
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| Nice written, allthough, I feel that it is a little "forced"/"bored" written. Many of your poems are truly nice written but read a little "standard". Offcourse I dont mean this bad.......U understand......Kind Regards |
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Re: Stop And Smell The Flowers
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by emystar on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 07:07:04 AM AEST
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Woops, I think that went way over someones head.
I didn't find it boring at all.
From your comment to steve and you felling much better, I thought the whole poem was about tunning out the planet and totally relaxing.
It's really funny as I read the first two lines of your poem that the two years you were away
had really seasoned your writing, etc. Not that there was anything wrong back then 'cause I'm been your fan for many years.
Awesome work. I've never found anything bad about any of your writes.
huggs, luv, peace, joy,
emy |
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Re: Stop And Smell The Flowers
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by eternalsunshine on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 07:28:05 AM AEST
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lovely, nice flow of words
nicely painted... |
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Re: Stop And Smell The Flowers
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 09:20:50 AM AEST
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wow an enlighting happy poem from you today.. i really enjoyed this.. lovely
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Stop And Smell The Flowers
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 05:35:42 AM AEST
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Jen,
I loved this and the first two lines just took me away.
Yes Steve gave some good advice. Nature will heal all things.
I found this delightful and I am glad you are feeling better.
May I come watch the butterfly with you??
Huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Stop And Smell The Flowers
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by holy on
Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 11:12:48 AM AEST
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Good afternoon, my dear sister,
I am staying here and smelling the flowers,the butterfly is flying around them, so beautiful and lovely, I prefer I am there with you......
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Re: Stop And Smell The Flowers
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 09:27:55 PM AEST
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A beautiful, calming piece. This is wonderful.
Deadwriter
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Re: Stop And Smell The Flowers
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 01:23:50 AM AEST
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I'll comment on this littile master peice with
your question you asked in your comment
on my poem, and i quote, " i don't know
how you do it Ben, every time " easy, just
read your tittle . . . ty 4 your always most
apprciated read, your writting is in a class
by itself, no pun teach, lol.
((((Jenni_K)))) |
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