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I'm mr. murder
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 01:30:29 AM in AEST
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I'm Mr. Murder
I didn't mean to hurt her
but i got mad over time
and eventually lost my mind
It went by quick
I went down fast
only thing that upset me was the words she chose last
She said I cheated on you
and I said we're threw.
and I asked why
was I to shy.
was I not your perfect man
or was this all your plan
I waited for an answer
But all I heard was silence
All you ever hear after violence
Today I'm sorry we had a fight
Now I know what I did wasn't right
I'll just fell guilty every night
So from now on I'm knon as Mr. Murder.
but to this day I wish I hadn't hurt her
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Voice of the Silent
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2008-06-07 01:30:29]
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Re: I'm mr. murder
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 01:41:45 AM AEST
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The title drew me in and I stayed drawn all the way to the end.
Well expressed
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Re: I'm mr. murder
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 04:03:31 AM AEST
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Nice write, had a strong and powerful message.
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Re: I'm mr. murder
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by ConcietySpawn on
Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 09:36:20 PM AEST
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