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Valley of My Soul
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 01:07:41 AM in AEST
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In a valley of my soul I weep
For a long lost love that the angels keep
Through the mist I drag my broken heart
It was not yet time for us to part
I have etched my face with the lines of tears
Wished for all the world to rewind the years
Locked myself in echoes of the past
Touched your face in dreams I prayed would last
Long silent nights become cloaks of despair
Ritual robes that I know I must wear
Emotion of happiness crumbled to dust
All that was positive, now left to rust
Two places I set at my table each night
Just folly to others, to me it seems right
As soft candle flickering shadows the room
I sway by myself to our favourite tune
What future for me do the heavens conspire ?
I am no more than empty shell, ash without fire
In the evening storms lingering, whispering your name
Rekindle my being, for you are my flame
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Re: Valley of My Soul
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by elle on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 02:58:04 AM AEST
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| I love the depth of feeling that you brought to the surface. I especailly love the last line "rekindle my being, for you are my flame." this releases the intensity of everything within. thanks. great read. peace. elle |
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Re: Valley of My Soul
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 03:30:22 AM AEST
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Oh my friend, this is touching, reaching deep.
Beautiful poem but so sad and your heartache I am so sorry for. Yes, in life death coming suddenly and before its times is one of the hardest goodbyes there is. I feel you here.
Hugs
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Re: Valley of My Soul
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 06:04:08 AM AEST
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Emotions run rampant in this poem. It flowed so perfectly. I can't select a favourite part.. Loved it....
Jenni |
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Re: Valley of My Soul
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by eternalsunshine on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 07:20:44 AM AEST
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i totally feel your longing
a beautiful picture you painted,,,lovely, nice flow..
wish you the best... |
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Re: Valley of My Soul
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by Puppy on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 08:04:22 PM AEST
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This is such an emotional poem and is written beautifully.......
Puppy :) |
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Re: Valley of My Soul
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by thistle_and_fern on
Monday, 22nd February 2010 @ 10:57:37 PM AEST
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You have the insight of an old wise soul.. All was expressed in this poem.
Keep writing Steve, you have a wonderful gift.
Julie |
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Re: Valley of My Soul
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 05:34:51 AM AEST
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| Really nice write always use that gift you have I know you will. |
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