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RAGING STORM
Contributed by
deadwriter
on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 06:28:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Raging Storm
Tonight the heavens put on a show
Lightning scattered to and fro
It continually lit up the sky
It was captivating to the eye
I thought about you while watching the storm
Wondering if you were safe and warm
Hoping you were somewhere dry
Without a single tear in your eye
I know recent events have made you sad
Even have pushed you to be mad
I want you to see that in me you will find
A true friend that will work to ease your mind
I will do my best to calm the storm in your life
To bring happiness by destroying the strife
I know we cannot really sit together and talk
But from your side I will never walk
Deadwriter
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2008-06-06 06:28:11]
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Re: RAGING STORM
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 06:40:07 AM AEST
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Another caring and thoughtful write, Deadwriter...
Hugs
Jenni
Great imagery, btw... I love it!!! |
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Re: RAGING STORM
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 06:41:56 AM AEST
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| beautiful write...hope u and ur friend can work things out together even through the storm =) |
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Re: RAGING STORM
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 07:10:47 AM AEST
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It sounds like a beautiful storm. This is another beautiful write and once more shows your heart and caring nature. You are a great friend.
Lovely write.
Michelle |
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Re: RAGING STORM
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 03:19:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful write...makes me wish I could go back to TX and watch the storms from my parent front porch like I used to do as a child. You paint a beautiful picture...and I hope you and your friend remain close.
Rich |
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Re: RAGING STORM
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by elle on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 08:38:34 PM AEST
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| this is a wonderful portrayal of friendship. indeed an offering not to be denied by the wise of heart. when our writen word turns to feeling when encountered by another, now that is a beautiful thing. three cheers for the friend in you. peace. elle |
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