|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Savior
Contributed by
Craze
on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 09:36:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Tearing me apart,
Drowning my heart,
I don't know where to start,
The voices in my head,
Damn me to be dead,
I choose to live in agony instead,
Cut my wrists,
Ball my fists,
A chance at life I guessed I missed,
Roses fall,
Lillies stand tall,
Your name I call,
Darkness now consumes me,
Want to be free,
Want to flee,
Death and dieing,
To stay alive I'm still trying,
Why are you still lying,
Who can cure,
Something so impure,
Heaven send me a savior!
Copyright ©
Craze
... [
2008-06-05 21:36:48]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Savior
(User Rating: 1 )
by SOCALGIRL on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 11:09:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This poem is very deep, I can picture it as a cry for help. |
|
|
Re: Savior
(User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 01:33:25 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It appears that you are enduring...but still looking for help.
Keep pluggin'
Good write |
|
|
Re: Savior
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 01:58:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I like that we can feel your struggle. pain, always a very strong teacher. who can cure? let us look inside. . . peace. elle |
|
|
Re: Savior
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 02:16:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very deep and emotional. good write. however all of us have felt like this from time to time. and we continue to feel like this until we realize that searching for someone else to help mus never goes quite the way we planned. my advice to you is to get up dust yourself of and realize that your happiness and life have nothing to do with who is around us or our enviroments but rather ourselves. look inside yourself for the answers |
|
|
Re: Savior
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 09:19:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You my friend have definately still got it.
Great write.
Deadwriter
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
